I promised this excerpt a few days ago, but as often happens at this time of year things got a bit crazy and I didn't get around to it, but everything is ready to go now!
This story is one that is currently under construction and has been for some time. My intention when writing it was for the first sex scene to be THE story... a short and sweet, written in one hour type of deal. After writing this first scene I became inspired to write 'just one more scene', which as you may suspect led to another 'just one more scene' and another and another and another. It quickly turned into a full blown story.
'Flatmates' (as I am unofficially calling it) is a story about two flatmates - Elle & Carter - and what happens when they FINALLY give in to the months of sexual tension that have been building between them.
I plan to post up the next few pages of this soon, so stay tuned!
In the meantime, here are the first few pages of 'Flatmates', and as with my previous excerpts, I have added a link if you would like to download the story as a PDF
Flatmates (excerpt 1) - Bree Guildford
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'Flatmates' (unofficial title) - excerpt 1
Kaylee and Elle had
been friends for as long as they could remember; after school they
had moved in together and transitioned into their post-high school
lives. They had been through all the shitty times together, as well
as all of the good times, and had always been there for each other no
matter what was going on. Boys had come and gone, men had come and
gone – but their friendship always stayed rock solid and they both
considered themselves extremely lucky to have that constant support
system.
None of that changed
when Kaylee had met Sebastian – Sebastian had understood how close
Elle and Kaylee were – and there had never seemed to be any of the
tension between the boyfriend & the best friend, like there often
was. Sebastian was happy to let Kaylee do her thing with Elle, and
Elle felt the same as far as Kaylee seeing Sebastian went. All that
had changed, really, was that Kaylee had fallen madly in love,
something that in turn had made Elle very happy. A few months later
Kaylee and Sebastian had gotten engaged and then, four months after
that, they had gotten married. Elle, of course, had been the boss
bridesmaid and had had a lot of fun helping Kaylee prepare for the
wedding.
Kaylee and Sebastian
getting married had however meant that Elle and Kaylee's days of
living together were over. As it was, their landlord had put the
house on the market a few weeks before the wedding, so they would
have had to find a new place anyway. Elle had been a bit sad about
leaving, but it had felt kind of fitting for that chapter of their
lives to close and the next chapter to begin for both of them, in
brand new surroundings. But it had turned out that Elle hadn't needed
to move anywhere. Two weeks before the wedding Sebastian had come
over to pick Kaylee up for the weekend and he had told Elle he wanted
to talk with her. Sebastian had informed her that he and Kaylee had
talked about it and they had decided to buy the house that the girls
had been living in, and that if Elle wanted to stay on as a tenant,
she was more than welcome to. Elle had agreed straight away – she
hated moving and hated dealing with new landlords. It had
been the perfect solution.
The only problem Elle
had was that there was no way she could comfortably afford to pay the
rent on her own. Kaylee had offered to keep paying rent until Elle
found someone else, but Elle had felt that was going above and beyond
and she had told Kaylee not to even think about it... she just
wouldn't go for coffee 50,000 times a week, or buy all her trashy
magazines she just HAD to buy each week (and never read). Again
Sebastian had saved the day by telling Elle that there was a guy on
his team who was looking for a new place, because his flatmate was
moving his girlfriend in. Elle had told Sebastian it sounded like a
good solution for both of them and then couldn't help but giggle when
he told her it was Carter who was needing a new place. Kaylee had
winked at Elle and Sebastian had looked at them curiously. Kaylee
had explained that Elle was rather keen on Carter; this of course had
caused Elle to blush and try to explain that she merely thought he
was an exciting player.
The wedding had been
perfect, Kaylee had looked stunning, and Sebastian had looked very
handsome. They had gone on their honeymoon for two weeks right
after the wedding and Elle had known she'd miss Kaylee terribly, but
she had also been very excited for her best friend. She would at
least have someone to keep her company while Kaylee was away, because
Carter was due to move in the day after the wedding.
From the moment Carter
had moved in he and Elle had got on extremely well. She'd been
worried that it might be a little awkward, but it never had been.
They seemed to have the same sense of humour, and were both pretty
laid back. They had similar tastes in music, and liked the same TV
shows and certain movies... their friendship had developed very
naturally, and they'd quickly become close friends.
A few months after
Carter had moved in the flirting had started. Nothing too serious,
just little looks and comments, and teasing... LOTS of teasing. They
had become almost TOO comfortable with each other and would often
find themselves talking about sex in some way or another. Carter had
told her about an ex of his who'd had certain weird fetishes, Elle
had told him about an ex of hers who had been particularly...
untalented when it came to the bedroom. Every now and then they
would share a few beers, something which guaranteed sex talk. It got
to the stage that Elle knew it would only take one very drunken night
for them to fall into bed with each other.
She couldn't deny that
she found him attractive. His muscles were to die for and she'd
often found it hard not to stare, especially when he was walking
around with a top off. On the flip side though, she had caught him
looking at her a LOT, particularly her boobs, so it wasn't as if the
perving was one sided.. In what was an obvious case of intentional
teasing, they both tended to flaunt their 'assets' around each other.
Elle would found herself starting to wear nothing but low cut tops
and Carter would always seem to find a reason to walk around without
a top on. Had they not been living together Elle knew they'd have
wound up in bed... probably over and over and over, but she knew that
if they started sleeping together it would inevitably end up making
things awkward between them, and that wasn't something she wanted.
It wasn't just because they lived under the same roof, but also
because she knew it would wind up ruining their friendship. The
flirting had continued until one day when EVERYTHING changed between
them.
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Carter took her by
surprise as she was leaving the room, grabbing her by the arm and
pulling her gently back towards him.
“Where do you think
you're going?” he asked her, his hand still firmly on her wrist.
She bit her lip. Standing in such close proximity to him she
couldn't help but notice how good he smelled... or just how biteable
his neck looked. She blinked hard to try and stop the thoughts from
continuing, but to no avail.
“You wanted me to
show you where the DVDs were.... that's what I did... now I'm going
back out to the lounge....” she replied, trying to not make eye
contact with him. His eyes put her in a trance-like state and would
make her putty in his hands... quite literally.
“I seem to remember
you telling me you'd show me where they were, even though I'd only
asked you to tell me...” he replied, giving her a rather
smoldering look. A look that made her whimper internally.
“You would have had a
man look, hence why I showed you instead,” Elle retorted, trying
again to not focus on his neck... or on the snug fit of his top
around his arms and shoulders. He turned ever so slightly and she
turned with him, ending up with her back toward the wall. He stepped
in towards her, one hand planted on either side of her head, and she
had no choice but to lean back against the wall. He raised an
eyebrow at her.
“It's almost as if
you wanted to be alone in this bedroom with me,” he commented
again, stepping closer to her and leaving very little space between
them. She could feel her resolve very quickly slipping away.
Carter pressed up
against her making sure his hips were pressing nice and firmly
against hers. She whimpered at the contact then gasped when he bent
his head down and bit softly into the crook of her neck. She knew
she should leave right then, flee, escape.. but something kept her
rooted to the spot and as his mouth moved up her neck she couldn't
help but let out a little moan... and she knew that with that, she
was in trouble.
He pulled his top up
over his head and cast it aside. Again he leaned forward to nibble
at her neck, and when she let out another moan he moved back a tiny
bit and undid his pants, pulling them down slightly. She couldn't
help but look down and gasped when she saw his cock. Any thought of
escaping while she could completely left her mind and she realised
she had finally succumbed to his..... well, whatever it was about him
that attracted her to him so powerfully. He continued working her
neck with his mouth, causing a rather intense stirring between her
legs and her hands instinctively went up to his shoulders. She
whimpered as her hands made the first contact with his warm skin, and
as he bit into her neck again she impulsively dug her nails into his
broad shoulders.
When his mouth moved up
her neck and he gently nibbled on one of her earlobes, she moaned
loudly and could feel her pussy starting to throb. Leaving the room
certainly was the last thing on her mind and all she wanted now was
to feel him inside her. It had been a long time coming. They had
been tip-toeing around it for months, the innocent flirting, all the
sexual innuendo... realistically she'd known it would happen
eventually, and admittedly she'd imagined it a lot. Not that she'd
confess that to him.
She was caught off
guard when he moved his hands down her back and cupped her bottom in
his hands. He lifted her up and pressed her up against the wall and
her legs automatically wrapped tightly around his waist. She felt
his cock brushing against her hole and blushed when she remembered
she had no panties on. He gave her a charged look that suggested he
was rather glad she'd decided to go pantiless that day, and that she
had chosen to wear a skirt. In one quick movement he pulled her down
on him, his cock sliding easily into her pussy. When he was all the
way inside her they stopped and stared at each other, their eyes wide
and full of lust and desire...
He began to move his
hips, thrusting slowly in and out of her sopping pussy. She couldn't
believe how good he felt inside her, or the way that his cock hit all
the right spots on the way in and the way out. Her pussy was
throbbing, her clit pulsating, and as he started thrusting harder and
faster she began gasping for air, her fingernails digging into his
shoulders. Unable to control the sounds she was making, she began to
cry out loudly, the head of his cock hitting the back of her pussy
with every stroke, sending jolts of pleasure through her entire body.
Any other time it probably would have hurt, but there was so much
sexual tension between them that they both got carried away very
quickly.
He groaned as he
pounded her pussy, she wasn't sure if she'd ever felt a cock hitting
so deep inside her. She tigtened her legs again and took him even
deeper inside. Because she was hard up against the wall and couldn't
move at all her pussy was taking the full brunt of each of his hard,
almost forceful thrusts. It was an amazing feeling, better than
anything she had experienced before. Her cries of pleasure could no
doubt be heard by anyone within a 10km radius of the house, but she
didn't give a damn because she hadn't been fucked like that for
years.
The constant friction
and pressure against her clit made it throb intensely and each time
he made one of his powerful thrusts the throb only intensified. It
felt to her as if her pussy was on fire, there was so much pressure
building deep inside that it was almost uncomfortable, in the most
glorious of ways. When he bit her firmly on the neck she screamed
out and tightened her legs around his waist, managing to somehow
allow him to hit deeper, and her fingernails dug even harder into his
shoulders, as if she was using her nails to cling on for dear life.
He sped up his thrusts
and she noticed her pleasure filled cries and moans were being
matched by his own loud moans and groans of desire. Hers were
getting more high pitched and his were getting deeper... she could
tell that they were both getting very close to the limit of what they
could handle. The months of sexual tension between them were finally
being released in a very fast and furious manner. Her pussy began
clenching wildly at his cock and at the same time she felt her entire
pelvic region contracting tightly and with a couple more perfectly
timed thrusts, her orgasm burst free. Her fingernails digging
deeply, her thighs tightly squeezing his waist, her pussy clenching
and releasing his cock, over and over and over and over. Before she
had a chance to ride out her orgasm she felt his entire body go
rigid against her and he came with a loud groan, pushing into her
with all of his bodyweight, his cock pulsing inside her, the warm
burst of his cum obvious from inside her.
They remained as they
were, both breathing heavily, both utterly spent. They stared at
each other again, this time grinning at each other giddily as they
both thought about what had just happened. Still supporting her,
he took two steps backward and sat down carefully on the edge of the
bed, slowly lying backward. She rolled off him and lay beside him,
still trying to catch her breath properly, trying to get her head
around what had just happened. And how it had happened. And how
fucking mindblowing it had been.
“Worth the wait??”
he asked, when his breathing had started returning to normal
“Worth the wait...”
she confirmed, and they both laughed.
Oh yeah, it was worth it! ;)
ReplyDeleteVery nice and very hot! Love it!
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