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Monday, 28 April 2014

Lucy learns first hand that oral CAN in fact be amazing

What's wrong with me?  This will be my second excerpt in a few days!

A couple of nights ago I was re-reading one of my un-finished works on my Kobo.  I couldn't sleep, the wifey was very much asleep, but I couldn't be bothered getting out of bed.  As I read it I came across a particular part of the story and knew I had to share it here on my blog.

So here we are!

This excerpt is from the same un-finished story that has brought you such excerpty delights as:
Beau & Jane - hotel sex
Asher & Jane - reunion sex
Beau & Jane - horny baking

This particular excerpt is focused on Asher and his girlfriend Lucy.  Lucy made it clear early on in their relationship that oral sex does nothing for her... all because of the lousy oral attempts a couple of ex boyfriends.  Jane and Leah know that if Lucy puts her faith in Asher and lets him go down on her she won't be disappointed, and eventually they have the chance to convince her of this.  In a good mood and prepared to give it a go, Lucy leaves Jane and Leah's house and heads home to wait for Asher to return from work...


Curious to see what happens?  Read on!


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Realising what the time was Lucy told the girls she was going to leave so she could be home when Asher got back from work. Lucy left with the raunchy vampire book in hand and decided that her amazing boyfriend needed a particularly awesome treat when he got home, so rather than heading straight back to the house she stopped at the nearest lingerie store and bought a sexy red cami. She reached for the matching panties but stopped herself and decided that panties would just get in the way.

By the time she got home Asher had sent her a text to say he was on his way so Lucy quickly put her new purchase on, straightened up the bed and then lay down and read some of her new book while waiting for the sound of the front door opening and closing, announcing Asher was home. Of course Lucy's curiosity led her to skim through the book in search of the sex scenes and after reading a couple she was more than a little horny and EXTREMELY in need of her boyfriend's magical touch.

The front door opened and closed and she heard Asher dropping his bag in the hallway. He called out to her and she called back saying that she was in the bedroom. When he walked in he grinned as he registered what she was wearing and by the time he'd made it to the bed he was wearing just his boxers which he quickly removed before joining her on the bed. Lucy pulled him down and kissed him with more hunger than he was obviously expecting because when the kiss came to an end he chuckled and asked what had gotten into her. Lucy didn't reply, just pulled him down for another hungry kiss. She could feel him going hard against her and wondered if perhaps she should abandon her original plan because it seemed mean to get him hard and then him NOT be able to... relieve... that hardness immediately. But at the same time Leah and Jane had piqued her curiosity. Asher moved on top off her and Lucy bit her lip as she looked at him.

Um, can you move down?” Lucy asked and Asher grinned as he moved down so he was level with her boobs and then started to suck on one of her nipples. Lucy moaned and then shook her head. “No, down further,” Lucy directed and he looked curiously at her then moved down so he was level with her belly which he started to kiss. “No... further...” Lucy said and gently pushed down on the top of his head. Asher moved down and settled between her legs then looked up at her and Lucy smiled shyly. “Yea... there,” she confirmed and Asher looked at her in surprise and then smiled.

Lucy smiled back and closed her eyes then took a deep breath as she prepared for that first touch. Asher kissed her inner thighs and then lightly kissed the outside of her pussy before running a finger gently down her slit. She heard him gasp and knew he was surprised by how wet she was. As he continued running his finger up and down her slit Lucy began to long for the feel of his tongue against her clit... an urge she had never felt before. As Asher repositioned himself between her legs Lucy could feel his warm breath against her wetness and fought against a moan that tried to escape. He hadn't even touched her with his tongue yet and she was starting to respond. Maybe Leah and Jane were right. Maybe oral COULD be amazing...

Lucy felt Asher's tongue make contact... it was such a light contact she wondered if she was imagining it but as he licked slowly up her slit there was no doubt in her mind that it was in fact real. Lucy sighed happily as Asher ran his tongue slowly back down to her hole. When Asher began to run his tongue back up toward her clit Lucy was surprised at the pleasurable sensations that started coursing through her body. Asher ran his tongue back down to her hole and she was taken by surprise when rather than running his tongue back up he dipped the tip of his tongue inside her hole. Lucy moaned with delight. It was such a strange but amazing feeling... there was pressure and heat and it was like nothing she'd felt before.

Asher licked back up toward her clit and this time rather than running it straight back down he ran his tongue back and forward over her clit a few times and this caused an unexpected clench deep inside. Lucy moaned as his tongue arrived back at her hole and this time his tongue hit a little deeper inside. Lucy cried out and found herself moving her hand to the back of Asher's head and pushing on it as if she was trying to get more of his tongue inside her. Asher pushed his tongue a little deeper and flicked it, hitting some delicious little spot just inside her pussy, which made her cry out loudly. As he ran his tongue back up between her folds he did so with more pressure than before and Lucy couldn't restrain the loud moan that escaped from her lips.

Lucy was aware of Asher moving slightly and she felt his forearms resting on her upper thighs as he put his fingers on her and spread her lips. Lucy wasn't sure why he did that until she felt his tongue back on her clit and groaned loudly as she registered how much more intense the sensations on her clit felt. Obviously he had taken her clit out of hiding... one could say. Asher didn't move his tongue back down and instead began to concentrate all his efforts on her clit which caused Lucy to start moaning even louder and to grasp one of his arms with her hand. She was being bombarded by plesurable sensations which were making her feel rather flustered and as if she was about to lose control. Lucy found her hand again going to the back of his head and though she tried not to she couldn't stop herself from pressing down again. She NEEDED more pressure, she NEEDED his tongue to finish her off.

Asher began to move his tongue faster and with more pressure and Lucy could feel her orgasm quickly starting to build. She was feeling overwhelmed in the most incredible of ways. Asher really DID have a magical tongue and she wished she had let him go down on her earlier. Lucy cried out loudly as he again used more pressure and she could feel her insides starting to tighten to the point that she thought something was wrong with her, but when Asher moved his tongue faster against her, that tightness was suddenly released and she cried out loud and long as her orgasm hit. Asher kept moving his tongue against her until her orgasm had subsided and then he broke the contact and moved up her body until they were face to face. Asher pulled her onto her side and they kissed a very slow, sweet kiss... the fact she could taste herself on him the entire time was more of a turn on than Lucy had imagined it would be and when they broke off the kiss she grinned at him.

Wow,” was all Lucy could manage as she melted into him.
I love you,” Asher whispered as he stroked her hair.
Uh huh,” Lucy responded and Asher chuckled. She badly wanted to say 'I love you too', but found herself physically unable to form any words.

They were silent for a couple of minutes, both reflecting on what had just happened... but Lucy was very aware Asher was going to be curious about why after all that time she had finally wanted him to go down on her.

Luce, if you don't mind me asking, what brought that on?” Asher asked, a little shyly she thought.
Well I went and saw Jane and Leah after my interview and um, we kind of got to talking about you,” Lucy began and Asher chuckled.
I wondered how long it would be before you started asking them questions,” Asher commented and kissed her playfully on the neck.
There was nothing sordid, no details or anything,” Lucy reassured him, not that she thought he would mind if that had been the case. “Long story, Jane mentioned she hoped I was having lots of sex and oral to make up for the fact she can't do either, because of the whole post-partum thing, and I mentioned we'd been having lots of sex, but not oral,” Lucy continued, Asher gazing intently at her. “Well, Jane and Leah convinced me not to let my past experiences ruin my thoughts about oral, and both reassured me that if I... well, if I let you... do that... that I wouldn't regret it,” she finished the story.
And have your thoughts on oral changed now?” Asher asked with a wink. Lucy grinned at him.
Leah and Jane weren't joking when they mentioned you have a magical tongue!” Lucy exclaimed and Asher laughed.

Further discussion ceased as Lucy felt Asher's hardness against her hip. There was only one thing she wanted to do and that involved a lot of kissing, a lot of touching and Asher's cock buried deep inside her pussy.

Thursday, 24 April 2014

Beau & Jane ~ much needed hotel sex

I am going to try and start posting excerpts more regularly, and decided that tonight I would post one of my favourite scenes I have written.  This is from a story that probably won't get any further than my own computer, but I have enjoyed loved writing it and have learnt a lot whilst writing it.

The story follows a core group of three characters, Jane, Leah and Asher.  Amongst other things Asher acts as a sperm donor for Jane and Leah - and within the year Jane gives birth to baby Ryan.  

Things aren't exactly straight forward though... and without ruining too much of the story (with the thoughts of posting more excerpts), Leah goes out and has a very drunken New Years with their friend Beau... a drunken New Years that results in drunk sex (with Jane's blessing) and nine months later the arrival of baby Luca.  Along the way Leah, Jane and Beau start spending more time together and perhaps inevitably fall in love and find themselves in a polyamorous relationship.

It might not be 'normal', it might not be socially accepted but for the three of them it works, and they all look forward to being their own little unique family.

This excerpt begins on the day Leah gives birth to Luca.  After spending as much time as they can at the hospital with Leah and Luca, Jane and Asher (with baby Ryan) go back to the hotel so they can all catch up on a little sleep, after what has been an intense 24 hours.

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Luca started crying and moments later Ryan joined in. It had begun. Beau had a feeling they would be up for months of two babies crying at the same time and while he was sure they would find it frustrating at times, he also quite liked it... it served to remind him that they were now a bonafide family.



Jane gave Ryan another quick feed on the bed and then smiled sadly at Beau when she agreed with him that it was time to go. They watched Leah feeding Luca and could see that she was close to falling asleep, so when Leah had finished feeding their newborn baby Beau had a final cuddle then put him safely in his little hospital issue bassinet. When his sister-in-law Morgan was in hospital after having Riley she had fallen asleep holding him and dropped him... he had fallen to the floor and the next few hours had been very stressful for Morgan while the doctors did tests and x-rays on Riley to make sure he hadn't been injured in the fall. He didn't want Leah going through that.



There were lots of tears when he and Jane said goodbye to Leah and Luca, and as they left the room they bumped into Asher and Lucy. Beau explained what was going on and Lucy said they would take Leah her food but leave straight away so she could get some sleep. Beau gratefully took his and Jane's bags of food and after saying goodbye to Asher and Lucy, he took Jane's hand in his as they made their way to the hotel, Ryan snuggled up on her shoulder.



When they got up to their room Beau told Jane to go and have a shower. While she did that, Beau had some quiet time cuddling with Ryan and realised how much he had missed him over the past 24 hours. Beau lay back on the bed with Ryan and sighed happily. He couldn't believe how perfect it felt knowing that both of their babies had been born. He had expected to feel a bit panicked or stressed out, maybe even scared when Luca arrived because going from one baby to two seemed like a huge thing... but in reality the only thing he felt was even more loved up and almost impatient to get on with life with the two loves of his life and their two babies.



Jane came back into the room and confessed she had almost fallen asleep in the shower. Beau wasn't at all surprised, they had had a HUGE past 24 hours and it hadn't helped at all that they had already been up for 12 hours by the time Leah had gone into labour! Beau kissed Jane as they swapped roles and he handed Ryan to her so he could have his shower. Standing beneath the water Beau found himself struggling to stay awake as well and wondered if he or Jane would even wake to Ryan crying that night. Part of him doubted it. He was so tired he could probably sleep through anything!



When he went back into the room Jane was tip toeing away from the bassinet, having just put Ryan down. Beau dried himself off and got into bed beside Jane before sending Leah a text to say goodnight. The message read 'We are both so proud of you, and both hate being away from you, but tomorrow we can take you and Luca home and start our new life as a slightly odd family. We love you... give Luca a kiss for both of us when he is awake next. Try and get some sleep xxx'.



Beau then finally replied to Dave's text about the twins saying 'Twins huh, that takes skill! We are all very excited for the two... three... five of you... Taking Leah and Luca home in the morning, feel free to come visit in the afternoon, I know Leah would love to see you both'. Dave replied soon after saying 'We were going to find out in the morning if we could meet the little guy. Go and get some sleep, you must all be bloody exhausted. Congrats again daddy!'. Beau smiled at the 'congrats again daddy' part... it never got old hearing or seeing himself referred to as dad/daddy.



Beau put his phone down and then moved closer to Jane and wrapped his arms around her. She sighed loudly against his chest and he could tell by the way she was breathing that she was crying. Beau let her cry and when she eventually looked up at him she smiled shyly.



“I'm sorry Beau... I just... Now that the day is finally over, the enormity of it is kind of hitting me,” Jane admitted and he nodded, understanding just how she felt.

“Oh sweety, don't apologise. I know just what you mean. I am feeling weird emotionally... I'm overjoyed and on a high but at the same time I have nothing left in the tank and feel like I could sleep for a year,” Beau told her and she sighed sleepily.

“I can't believe Luca is finally here. The pregnancy crap is FINALLY over...” Jane commented and Beau chuckled quietly.

“Gotta say, I'm glad it's not me who has to be pregnant because it doesn't look like a lot of fun, especially not at the end,” Beau remarked and Jane rolled her eyes.

“Don't get me wrong, it's a blessing and parts of it are just awesome... but yea, I'm glad that Ryan and Luca are both here now and we can have our bodies back,” Jane said. Beau frowned.

“Well, minus one part,” he replied and gently stroked one of Jane's boobs.

“Yea. That part does suck...” Jane agreed as she looked down at her bra-encased boobs and sighed.

“It's a sacrifice I am willing to make for Ry and Luca,” Beau teased.

“I love you so much,” Jane quietly said and leaned in so she could kiss him.



Beau kissed her back and was surprised when suddenly all his tiredness seemed to disappear. All he wanted was to kiss Jane and be close to her. He would do it all night if he could. It was weird that after months of there being a huge divide between them – in the form of a beautiful pregnant belly – suddenly their bodies could be pressed together properly. Beau sighed happily as he felt the heat of Jane's body against his. They had, of course, been naked together since Ryan was born but, because of Leah's discomfort in the last stage of her pregnancy, that night was the first time they had really been able to enjoy it.



Even if he had had to, there was no way Beau could stop kissing Jane. There was nothing fast or hungry about their kisses nor was there anything sexual... it was more of an emotional thing, almost as if by kissing they were replenishing each other's emotional stores. Whatever it was, Beau was so glad that he was there in that moment with Jane and couldn't think of anywhere he'd sooner be.



It was Jane who took the initiative and began to heat things up. Her kisses suddenly became deeper and as she began to moan against his mouth, Beau was aware of the fact she was pressing harder against him with her hips. It had been a long time since they had had sex – almost two months – and while Beau REALLY wanted it, he didn't want to pressure Jane if she wasn't quite ready.



Beau began getting hard and the heated look Jane gave him made it clear that she could feel it too. When she moved her body position so that the tip of his cock was nudging at her hole he got the feeling that she liked it. They kissed for another couple of minutes and Beau got increasingly harder, to the point he either needed to be inside her or they needed to stop kissing and touching.


Jane had always understood his needs and cues and when she moved her top leg over his waist, causing the top inch of his cock to enter her, Beau looked at her and smiled softly.



“Are you sure?” he asked and Jane nodded.

“So fucking sure, Beau... So. Fucking. Sure,” Jane exclaimed, her voice almost a whimper.

“I love you,” Beau whispered.

“I love you too,” Jane whispered back.



And then for the first time in almost two months Beau very slowly slid inside Jane. Jane let out a quiet moan and her body shuddered as she smiled at him.



“I have missed this,” Jane whispered and put her leg further over him, causing him to move deeper inside her.



They started to move slowly together and Beau loved the closeness between them. They may not have been moving hard or fast but because of the position they were in there was a lot of friction in all the right places – for both of them – and Beau groaned quietly as Jane put her hand on his hip and pulled him harder against her.



Each time his cock hit the back of her pussy Jane would clench tightly around him and moan softly in his ear. Both were conscious of the fact Ryan was in the room and their noise level never moved past a whisper but that didn't mean the sex wasn't spectacular. Beau loved how wet Jane was and how ready she had been for him... the way her pussy felt made him instantly harder and as they moved against each other Beau found himself groaning quietly. After such a long time NOT being intimate in that way Beau had almost forgotten just how much he enjoyed sex with Jane.



When Jane dug her fingernails into his hip Beau started to move harder against her and she countered that by moving harder against him. The friction on his cock was like nothing he'd felt before and as Jane started to gasp for breath, he felt her pussy tightening around him in a way that he knew meant she was going to cum very soon. Beau's own orgasm was building and when Jane buried her face in his chest they started to move harder again, grinding against each other until finally they both came in silence, gripping on to each other, pressing tightly together.



Beau nuzzled at Jane's neck and then softly kissed her, before they both fell into an immediate, deep sleep.



When Beau woke up the following morning Jane was sitting on the bed feeding Ryan. He smiled up at her and, for what felt like the millionth time since Ryan had been born, marvelled over just how much motherhood suited Jane. He loved nothing more than to watch her feeding Ryan... the way she looked lovingly at him made his heart melt.



“He been awake long?” Beau asked and Jane shook her head.

“No, but I think he's ready to go back down... might get another hour or two out of him,” Jane replied with a sigh. Beau looked at the clock and saw it was only 6am.

“I know you want to go see Leah and Luca, but it's still too early anyway, so perhaps we can all get another hour or two of sleep,” Beau suggested and Jane raised an eyebrow at him.

“You REALLY think I'll be able to get back to sleep?” Jane asked and Beau chuckled.

“Fine. We can at least snuggle for another hour or two,” Beau replied and Jane smiled at him.
“That sounds more like it,” Jane said and sighed again as Ryan began stirring, indicating he had had enough of his feed.

“Give him to me bub, I'll put him back to bed,” Beau said sitting up beside her. He was surprised when she didn't protest and allowed him to take Ryan from her arms.



Beau kissed Jane and then got off the bed and walked to the other side of the room, rubbing Ryan's back as he went. Quickly he was rewarded with a burp and a contented little sigh from Ryan, who was asleep before Beau even put him back in the bassinet. After kissing his son on the forehead Beau walked back over to the bed and climbed in beside Jane, who immediately found her way into his arms.



“I miss Leah,” Jane sighed and Beau kissed the top of her head.

“I miss her as well, seems so wrong without the three of us being in bed together,” Beau commented and then it was him who sighed, as he thought about what would happen when things got busier away at work and the fact he might need to spend regular nights away from home.

“I also miss Luca already... odd considering we didn't really get to spend that long with him after he was born,” Jane said.



As Beau had expected Jane soon began to cry, what he did not expect, however, was when Jane pulled him on top of her and looked up at him pleadingly.



“I need you, Beau,” Jane whispered, and although she was crying, something about the intensity of her voice and the look on her face caused him to feel immediately aroused.

“I'm right here,” Beau whispered and then dipped his head down so their lips could brush together.



Jane linked her hands behind his neck and pulled him down, the kiss deepening as he sensed just how needy she was. As she grazed her nails up and down the back of his neck Beau felt himself growing increasingly turned on, and when Jane spread her legs wider for him it was almost a reflex move for him to slowly press inside her, stopping just before he hit the back of her pussy. He broke off the kiss and smiled down at her, judging by the look on her face that she needed slow, deep sex, which would leave her feeling not only physically but emotionally connected to him. The same type of sex that Leah (and himself) had needed the night of the day that Jane had gone into premature labour.



Beau moved slowly against Jane, pressing deeper inside her with each thrust, until he couldn't move any deeper. Jane kept her hands behind his neck and soon pulled him down more so that her face was buried in his neck. Beau loved the close, intimate feel of the position, and enjoyed hearing Jane's quiet moans against his ear... a special gift only for him. Jane's hips soon found a rhythm with his and for a long time they moved with each other, enjoying the feeling of being pressed against one another, enjoying the closeness and the strengthening connection to one another.



Jane spread her legs further apart and while Beau missed the feeling of her legs being tightly around his waist, he liked the fact it meant they could take their time, that together they could slowly work up to the point that they both felt as if they were going to burst if they didn't orgasm soon.



There was nothing rushed about it and when his usual 7am alarm went off things were only just starting to get more frantic. Jane was bucking her hips harder against him and Beau could no longer control the depth and force of her thrusts, slamming into her with only one intention – to make her cum – and to make her cum HARD.



Jane's moans quickly turned to cries and the more he slammed into her, the louder they became. Of course Jane's loud cries spurred him on and he quickly felt his orgasm approaching, going from non-existant to as intense as he thought was humanly possible, in the space of about 20 seconds. Jane's pussy was squeezing him tightly, her arms were doing the same around his neck, and as her cries became screams Beau started to slam harder and harder until they were both grunting and screaming loudly, their bodies tensing up against each other as their orgasms got closer and closer and closer. FINALLY they exploded, both of them letting out loud strangled cries of pleasure as they pressed into each other, their bodies going rigid with the enormous physical release.



Before they could even come down from their orgasms there was a loud cry from the other side of the room and Jane looked at him in shock.



“Ryan! I forgot all about Ryan! OH MY GOD, no child should ever hear THOSE noises coming from their parents!” Jane exclaimed before collapsing into a fit of laughter.

“Poor little dude, he'll be traumatised for life!” Beau added and found himself laughing as well.

“I guess there will be no peaceful recovery period, will there?” Jane said with a smirk and Beau shook his head.

“Sounds like there is another little guy that needs you more than me,” Beau sighed dramatically and Jane giggled.

“There is nothing 'little' about you, my love,” Jane said with a wink and after Beau had moved off her, she got out of bed and walked over to where Ryan was crying in his bassinet and picked him up.



Beau sat on the bed beside Jane while she fed Ryan and when both of their cellphones went off they grinned at each other. Beau checked his text messages and sure enough the message was from Leah, it read 'had a good night with our little guy... but miss you both like crazy... please come and save me from this boring hospitalness!'. Beau text her back saying 'we missed you too bub, glad to hear you had a goodnight with Luca... Jane just feeding Ry and then we will be over as fast as we can! Love you xxx'.



Although Ryan didn't have a particularly large feed it seemed to take forever and by the time they were leaving the hotel room it felt as if it had been days since they had left Leah and Luca at the hospital, as opposed to one simple night. They were glad that Asher had thought to move their car to the hotel carpark the day beforehand, otherwise they'd likely have found their car had been towed. After a quick stop at the car to drop off all the non-essential Ryan-associated bits and pieces that were in the room they finally made their way to the hospital.










Monday, 31 March 2014

What's not to love about reunion sex?!

I realised today that it has been a long time since I posted an excerpt on my blog!  The last few samples of my writing I have posted, have been the 'Georgia & Zoe' stories, and while I love the series, I thought it was time I shared something a little different!  This excerpt is from a story I haven't really shared on here yet, so I will give you a little background...

Long story short
Leah and Jane (girlfriends) meet Asher at a party and an innocent night of threesome fun turns into so much more.  They quickly become best friends, and when Asher offers to act as sperm donor for the women, they agree.  Jane soon gets pregnant, and the friendship continues as usual...

... there is SO much more to this story, but where would the fun be in giving too much away too soon?

This specific excerpt focuses mainly on Asher and Jane, and the reunion sex they have when he gets back from being away for a month, visiting his parents.  Jane is around 12 weeks pregnant, and has moved from the 'so exhausted I can't move' phase, to the 'I am full of life and neeeeeeeeed sex, sex and more sex' phase...

If you want to download the (free) PDF file of this excerpt, you can do so by clicking this link:
Jane & Asher reunion sex

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for your enjoyment xxx

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Three days later, after almost four hours on a plane, Asher met Leah and Jane at the airport. It had been just under a month since he'd seen them last, and when he saw them waiting at the arrivals lounge he grinned to himself. He'd missed them more than he'd realised, and as they launched themselves into his arms, he decided they had missed him just as much! The girls spoke excitedly as they drove home, telling him about their month and about what they had done during their time off. Asher told them about his month at home and about the discussion he'd had with his parents. The girls were both surprised he had told his parents so soon, but neither seemed to mind. In fact, he thought that Jane seemed almost relieved to find out that his parents knew. When it came down to it, he was glad he'd told them because he hated to keep things from his family, especially from his parents.

Because Asher had left his car at Leah and Jane's, that was their first port of call after the airport. When he followed the girls inside, Jane took him by the hand and led him into the bedroom, while Leah got her robe from behind the bedroom door and, after winking at them, went into the bathroom and closed the door.

“My poor girlfriend is exhausted from all the sex I have been neeeeeeeeeding...” Jane explained.
“Oh that is no good!” Asher joked and winked at her.
“I know, especially since I'm rather in the mood for sex, right now,” Jane stated innocently. Asher walked up to her and lightly kissed her on the neck.
“Funny, because now you mention it, so am I,” Asher replied, just as innocently.
“We could help each other, you know,” Jane suggested, as she moved her hands up the inside of Asher's t-shirt.
“That's a very good idea,” Asher commented as he pulled Jane's top up and off, then dropped it on the floor at their feet.

After Jane's top came off the rest of their clothes followed suit quickly, and as they stood together, naked and kissing, Asher realised how badly he had missed the sex. Putting his hands on the backs of Jane's thighs, Asher lifted her up and walked toward the bed, then lying her down carefully, climbed on top of her and began to kiss her. For a few minutes they only kissed, working each other into a state of horniness that eventually led to the need for their bodies to become connected in the most intimate of ways.

Asher let out a shuddery groan as he slid inside Jane, amazed by how wet she was and stunned by how good it felt to be back inside her after a month of their only contact being via the phone. Before he was inside her Asher had decided that it was going to be a slow experience, that the sex was going to be very lengthy – BUT – feeling her pussy around his cock, all of that flew out the window. There was no way the sex could be anything but hard and fast. Jane wrapped her legs around his waist and pulled him deeper inside; Asher kissed her hungrily, and smirked against her mouth as she let out a loud moan of delight. How he had missed those sexy little noises of hers!

Asher started to move against Jane, spurred on by all the pent up need that he felt. There was a month's worth of sexual tension built up inside him, and it needed a release, immediately. Jane moved her hips in time with his, her thighs so tight around his waist that her ass was off the bed, meaning Asher could hit deeper and harder. He found himself groaning as Jane's pussy started to clench around his cock, and when he put his hands under Jane's shoulders, he was able to hit harder still – the cries coming from Jane suggesting it was just what she needed – his own groans signalling to her that it was what he needed too.

Jane cried out loudly as he started to move harder against her, and he was sure that from the bathroom he could hear the faint sounds of Leah moaning as well. Jane raised an eyebrow at him, telling him she had heard Leah's moans too. Jane's pussy started to squeeze his cock tighter and Asher forgot all about Leah's distant moans as he concentrated on the feeling of Jane's pussy around his cock. If it was possible, she was even wetter than usual, and Asher realised it was probably a pleasant side effect of pregnancy. If she was hornier than normal, it made sense for her to also be wetter than normal. When Jane moaned the word 'harder' Asher put his sole focus on pounding into Jane as hard as he could and was quickly rewarded by louder cries, and tighter contractions of her pussy around him.

As Jane's cries grew louder and more high pitched, Asher started to move as hard as he possibly could. He could feel the pressure building inside his cock and could also feel the pressure building inside Jane. She was extremely swollen and wet and it felt simply amazing. The faster Asher moved against her, the more friction that caused against his cock, and the increase in friction caused more pressure to build deep inside him. When Jane began making her telltale screamy squeals, Asher started to pound harder and harder against her, until – with a loud scream – she came, her nails digging into his shoulders, legs tight around waist, her entire body going stiff. Asher slammed into her another three times and then his own orgasm hit, and he let out a loud groan as he felt his release finally happen. He pushed into her one final time and then collapsed on top of her.

Eventually Asher rolled off Jane, but neither of them could form words, neither of them could even smile or laugh. All they could muster were the deep, loud, exhausted gasps of two people who had just experienced monstrous orgasms. Which they had. Leah came into the room while they were still lying in their useless post-orgasmic state, and taking her robe off, climbed onto the bed on the other side of him. She pulled the blankets up over them and for the next hour they all slept. Upon waking Leah decided that she was still too tired from sex, so went out to the lounge to watch DVDs and left Jane and Asher to get better reacquainted. For for the rest of the day he and Jane made up for lost time – with orgasm after orgasm after orgasm – after orgasm.

Tuesday, 21 January 2014

More than sex

Now that I have been blogging for a month, I decided it was time to post an excerpt of my writing that ISN'T a sex scene.

Yes, I am a writer of erotic romance, BUT there is more to my stories than plain ol' sex.  I like to think that my stories all have a good storyline and a decent amount of plot, not just sex here, sex there, sex everywhere.  The more I write, the more I find myself delving deeper into the world of each character, the result being storylines which are more emotionally driven... something *I* (as a reader, and a writer) enjoy.

The excerpt I am posting is the second of the story I have affectionately titled 'Bastard Daniel'.  As a general over view, Amelia and Charlotte are girlfriends (in love girlfriends, not friends who are girls!), each has a boyfriend.  Charlotte is in love with (and has a child to) Thomas, while Amelia is in love with (and is pregnant to) Daniel.  That is until Amelia catches Daniel having sex with Sarah, and their relationship is unsurprisingly called off.  Amelia becomes good friends with Harrison, and eventually they start dating... polyamorous relationship, baby in belly, and all.  I won't give away what happens at the end though!

Now where was I?  Oh right, excerpt #2.
It's a relatively short excerpt so I won't say too much, but in this excerpt Charlotte gets a chance to have a word (or 50) with the dirty cheating scumbag, who has broken her pregnant girlfriend's heart.  As you can imagine, she isn't going to have any nice words to say to him!  I might also add this isn't the last time Charlotte is going to tell Daniel just what she thinks of him!

In case you missed it, here is Bastard Daniel (excerpt 1)

And now I quite happily give to you excerpt number 2!

If you want to download the excerpt as a PDF file, you can do so by clicking on the following link
Bastard Daniel (excerpt 2) - Bree Guildford

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Bastard Daniel - excerpt 2!

After Amelia had been softly snoring for a few minutes Charlotte carefully moved out of the bed, got dressed, and tiptoed from the room, closing the door gently behind her. As she walked down the hall toward the living areas she could hear two male voices, which struck her as strange because she had left Thomas with Emily, and he hadn't mentioned that anyone was stopping by. When she got closer to the room she realised exactly who it was Thomas was talking to. Daniel. That filthy piece of scum. What was HE doing there? Moving closer to the door Charlotte stood and listened to what was being said in the dining room.

“I thought you'd understand where I'm coming from. You know what it's like to share,” she heard Daniel say to Thomas.
“No, I don't know where you're coming from. I love Charlotte, I respect and fully accept the relationship she and Amelia have, to the point that it is now a part of OUR relationship. I don't see it as sharing, I don't see it as only getting half of my time with Charlotte... it is life, it is the way our relationship works and it just feels natural to me,” Thomas replied and Charlotte smiled at his words.
“When I found out Amelia was bloody pregnant it was like all of a sudden I was third best... she would talk about the baby non-stop and it made me feel unimportant and...” Daniel started to say, before Thomas cut him off.
“She is EXCITED about the baby. She LOVES the baby... of COURSE she is going to talk about it a lot. The baby might not mean anything to you, but to Amelia, that baby is her world. All she wanted was to be able to share that excitement with you, but you were too selfish to think about things from her point of view,” Thomas said, sounding as exasperated as Charlotte felt.
“That baby was a fucking mistake. And you know what, I kind of wonder if Sarah is right and Amelia DID get pregnant on purpose,” Daniel announced.

Charlotte had heard enough. It was time to to make her thoughts on the matter known, whether Daniel liked it or not. Taking a deep breath she walked into the lounge and threw Daniel an angry look.

“You asshole. I can't believe you had the balls to show up here,” Charlotte spat out as she stopped at Thomas's side.
“It's my house too,” Daniel reminded her and Charlotte sniggered.
“Shall I get our accounts out and show you where the mortgage repayments have been coming from? I think you'll find that you haven't paid a cent toward the mortgage, Daniel. Therefore this house is NOT yours,” Charlotte informed him and then held her hand out. “With that in mind, you can give me your key now. Thomas will be here tomorrow afternoon when you pick up your shit... IF Amelia hasn't burnt it by then,” her voice was stern and cold, and she felt a little thrill of satisfaction when Daniel got his keys from his pocket and placed the house key into her waiting palm.
“If she touches any of my stuff I will be calling the cops,” Daniel declared and Charlotte rolled her eyes as she slipped the key into her back pocket.
“Why would she WANT to touch any of your stuff? She wants NOTHING to do with you,” Charlotte stated.
“Of course she wants nothing to do with me, she got the stupid baby she was always after, I guess I played my part,” Daniel said bitterly and Charlotte could feel the rage starting to bubble away in her stomach.
“YOU are a bastard. You know Amelia was doing what she could to avoid getting pregnant, you KNOW she had agreed to wait until you were ready to start a family. YOU know just as well as I do how upset she was when she found out about the pregnancy, she cried for days, upset that she had ruined your life by getting pregnant,” Charlotte said angrily, her voice getting louder with each word until she was shouting at him. “She was going to have an abortion because of you!”

“You think you're so tough, I bet you're going to throw something at my head as well,” Daniel said snidely and it was only then that Charlotte noticed the gash on his forehead. He was lucky Amelia hadn't thrown something bigger at him.
“I could throw something at your head, Daniel. Something big and hard that would cause a lot of damage... but I'm not going to. I don't want to waste my time and energy on a pathetic scumbag like you,” Charlotte told him, shooting him an icy glare.
“You're all talk, Charlotte,” Daniel said smugly and then looked at Thomas who was holding Emily. “Got him wrapped around your little finger too... you got the fancy house, you got the baby, I wouldn't be surprised if you tried to get rid of Amelia now so that you can have all of this to yourself,” he said acidly. Charlotte stepped in toward him and smiled sweetly.
“I can handle you insulting me, but I will not put up with you insulting Thomas or Amelia,” Charlotte announced then stepped in closer to him and, putting her hands on his shoulders, brought her knee up into his groin.

The contact between knee and balls was hard. Daniel let out a screech of pain then collapsed to his knees, holding his hands over his balls. Written over his face was pure pain. Written over Charlotte's face was pleasure. Throwing something at his head would have been fun, but hitting him where it REALLY hurt provided a bigger sense of enjoyment than a mere hit to the head ever could have. She watched Daniel struggling to his feet and after she had taken Emily from Thomas's arms she turned to him and sighed.

“You take out this piece of trash and I am going to go and feed this adorable little monkey of ours and then put her to bed,” Charlotte said, then kissed Thomas on the cheek and walked upstairs without turning back.

Wednesday, 15 January 2014

'You have to post this on your blog!' Yes Ma'am...

A few days ago my wife gave me inspiration for a new story - very unintentionally - and to say the writing has been flowing easily would be an understatement!  The scene has been set, the characters have had their first little introduction and for once in my life I have a story plan written on paper!  Like on REAL paper, not just on a word document.  I would take a photo as proof, but then I would give away the story & probably have to kill you (please note:  I really wouldn't kill you!).

Today I completed the first male/female sex scene and after reading it (and biting her thumb to the point she exclaimed 'ow!' afterward) she insisted that I post the scene to my blog.

So here I am.

The basis of this story is as follows:

Thomas and Charlotte are in love.  Charlotte and Amelia are in love.  Amelia and Daniel are in love.
They all live together in polyamorous bliss.
With Thomas and Charlotte's baby girl, Emily.
Then Amelia catches Daniel having sex with Sarah.
Amelia's life falls apart.
Not only is one of the loves of her life cheating on her, she is also sixteen weeks pregnant with his baby.
Amelia then develops an unexpected friendship with Harrison.  Harris for short.  But mainly Harrison.
Of course their friendship turns into more... but you'll need to read it to find out what happens!
There will be a happy ever after.
But... for Amelia and who?  Will it be Harrison or Daniel?
Is Harrison man enough to love another man's baby as his own?
Is Daniel man enough to admit he was an utter jackass and will he win Amelia back?

I will post the excerpt below, but if you would prefer to download it to read later, please feel free to use the link below to view and/or download the PDF file!
Excerpt of new story - Bree Guildford

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'Bastard Daniel' (obviously not an official title!) - excerpt one!

As she went to sit beside him, Thomas held out his arms and, rather than sitting beside him on the couch, Charlotte straddled his lap then put her arms around his neck and leaned into his chest. Thomas moved his arms around her and began to rub her back, something which always had a calming effect on her. She sighed. He knew her so well. After a few minutes Charlotte moved back from his chest and looked him in the eyes.

“I love you,” Charlotte told him before cupping his face in her hands and kissing him. She had never felt more grateful to have found such a wonderful man to share her life with.
“I love you too,” Thomas replied and this time, it was him who cupped her face before brushing his lips against hers.
“I am scared for Amelia,” Charlotte admitted and Thomas stroked her cheek softly.
“I am too... but she will be okay,” Thomas promised as he trailed his fingers down her cheek, over her jaw, down her neck and then inward, settling at the top of her cleavage.

When he leaned in to kiss her neck Charlotte could feel a familiar hardness developing in his pants, a hardness which continued to develop as he brushed his lips softly against the crook of her neck. After breaking the lip to neck contact Thomas looked at her sheepishly.

“Maybe you should get off me... my brain knows that you need to be comforted and not ravaged, but my body has different ideas,” he told her.
Charlotte responded by grinding her hips against him, “What I need is you... and I quite like what your body is suggesting.”
“Are you sure you wouldn't sooner just cuddle?” Thomas asked and Charlotte knew he wasn't asking because it was what he would sooner be doing.
“Remember earlier, when I made Amelia scream?” she asked him as she rolled her hips against him again.
He nodded his head. “Yes! And such perfect timing with Daniel in the house.”
“Well, that made me particularly horny,” she informed him, then let out a whimper of delight when he pulled her down at the hips.

The angle her hips were at meant that when he pulled her down, the hard bulge in his pants pressed against her clit, and she instinctively moved her hands up the inside of his top so she could claw at his chest. Thomas gave her a sexy grin then put a hand behind her head and pulled her in for a kiss. His lips brushed gently against hers; she meant to return his kiss equally as gently, but something boiled over inside her and the kiss became one of hunger and need. Her hands roamed beneath his t-shirt and, without realising it, she started to rake her nails down his chest in a way that she knew would be leaving marks. But she didn't care. She couldn't be held responsible for what she was doing... it was as if something had taken hold of her, something raw and animalistic. She didn't need comforting sex, she didn't need to be made love to, she needed to be fucked. Hard.

Charlotte moved her hands from underneath Thomas's t-shirt and quickly pulled it over his head; she needed his bare skin against hers, she needed to feel and see the muscles and angles she loved so dearly. With his top off, she could see the marks she had already left on his skin, and while she would usually be apologetic, this time she wasn't... the marks only served to make her hornier and needier for him. The desire to be naked with him soon became too much and Charlotte got off his lap and removed her top and then bra, while Thomas unbuttoned her pants and pulled them down over her thighs and past her knees. She had only just stepped out of her pants when she felt Thomas moving her panties downward, and, as she stepped out of them, she felt her hunger for him increase.

Thomas stood up and Charlotte helped him out of his pants and boxers, and when he was standing naked in front of her she took him in with her eyes, smiling very appreciatively when she reached his cock. The sight of his cock – thick, swollen and standing to attention – was the final straw for her. She put her hands on his shoulders then jumped up, wrapping her legs around his waist. His hands moved to her bottom and they began to kiss each other in a way that made it clear they were both on the same track about the type of sex they were about to have. Charlotte tightened her legs around his waist as he walked them from the lounge to the kitchen. When he pressed her up against the solid wall which acted as a partition between the kitchen and dining room, Charlotte tugged on his bottom lip with her teeth and gave him a heated look.

Charlotte loosened her legs to allow herself to slide down his strong waist just far enough that she could feel the heat of the tip of his cock at the entrance to her cunt. The anticipation of what was to come caused her to hold her breath and when she felt the tip of his cock pressing against her hole she felt her heartbeat speed up. She always loved that delicious moment, the excitement that coursed through her in the split second before his cock spread and stretched her open for the first time. She exhaled loudly as he finally pushed his cock inside her, filling her to the hilt and hitting various hot spots before coming to a stop when the tip made contact with the back wall of her pussy.

She tightened her legs and groaned against his neck when it caused him to hit even deeper inside, and another loud groan was elicited when he began to move against her. His first couple of movements were gentle, but then he started to move with the force and speed she so badly needed. Each time he slammed inside her she cried out loudly and knew that her cries were getting louder with each contact of his cock against the back of her pussy... but she couldn't get enough of the perfect mixture of pleasure and pain that his movements were causing. If the neighbours heard then so be it. If noise control turned up... well, chances were everything would be over by then anyway.

When Thomas stepped in a little closer his cock started to hit a new spot, a spot which made her scream whenever it was hit, a spot which made her want it harder and harder with each movement. Thomas gripped her hips and ass tightly with his hands so that he could move inside her with as much force as was possible, until he was hitting her so hard she became worried she was going to be propelled right through the wall. A little curious research online had taught Charlotte the spot had a name – the 'a spot' – and when it was hit repeatedly the result for her was an orgasm of epic proportions. The type of orgasm that would render her useless for an hour afterward. It was the type of orgasm she needed that night.

Thomas stopped moving against her and she looked at him, startled. Her pussy was squeezing and gripping at his cock, she NEEDED to feel him pounding into her throbbing cunt. She needed it so badly she was on the verge of tears when Thomas moved a hand behind him and moved her legs from around his waist.

“I know you need it harder,” was all Thomas said as he took her hand and led her upstairs.

Charlotte had no idea what he was doing, but when he led her past their bedroom she realised that they weren't done for the night. Her panicked feeling was replaced by curiosity, and when he opened the door to the main bathroom she felt the muscles of her pussy contracting tightly, so hard in fact, she was surprised she didn't cum from that alone. She followed Thomas into the bathroom and a loud moan escaped her lips when he moved behind her and put his hands on her hips as she gripped on to the vanity unit.

When they were looking through the house for the first time, Charlotte had jokingly stood in front of the vanity unit with Thomas standing behind her and they had realised that it would be the perfect height for THAT particular position. Charlotte parted her legs and tilted her ass up to give Thomas the perfect entry position, and as he slammed inside her, she let out a loud cry of pleasure. His cock hit her a-spot and she could feel the difference immediately. With each thrust, he pulled her back at the hips and pushed into her, the increased force of each impact sending jolts of pleasure right throughout her body and she felt her orgasm starting to build very deep down.

Charlotte felt her pussy tightening and Thomas started to slam faster into her. Her cries turned into shrieks and as they became more high pitched Thomas dug his fingers into her hips and pulled her back even harder against him. He played her like an instrument... he was a master when it came to making her cum, his timing was always perfect and he knew when to move faster or harder, when to move slower or deeper, when to pull her back or when to not touch her hips at all. She began to gasp for breath as her orgasm approached and he moved his hips steadily faster, not so fast it caused her to cum straight away, but fast enough that each increase of speed pushed her closer to the brink of orgasm.

When she knew her orgasm was about to hit Charlotte pressed back as hard as she could against Thomas and screamed loudly as his cock hit her a-spot so hard and perfectly that she fell into the deep abyss of her orgasm. The only thing she was conscious of was the furious clench and release of her pussy around his cock as he moved faster and faster against her, then he quickly followed her into the abyss and came with a loud groan as he pressed into her with all of his body weight.

In a state of semi-consciousness they both slumped to the floor, and she settled between his legs with her back against his chest, his cheek against her shoulder, hands resting lightly on her thighs. 

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I think Charlotte got what she needed!