Tuesday 24 December 2013

Yet to be named story - excerpt 1

This excerpt is from the first story I finished and is yet to be officially named.  I have been referring to this story as 'vampire rugby', because it centers around two rugby players who also happen to be vampires.

Anyone who knows me will know that I don't 'do' vampires or anything supernatural in nature, and that I am a huge rugby fan.  It is my disinterest in vampires and interest in rugby that brought this story into being.  One day I very jokingly told my wife that maybe if someone wrote about vampire rugby players, I would be more inclined to take an interest... I then went about my day as normal without giving the idea of vampire rugby players a second thought.  Until 2am the following morning, when I woke up with a storyline ready to go.

It turned out that the someone who would write about vampire rugby players was me.

As a general overview the story follows four characters - Victoria, Lizzie, Alex and Jake - who between them have three relationships.  Alex and Jake met (long time girlfriends) Victoria and Lizzie at a cafe one innocent afternoon.  After it was revealed that Alex was Lizzie's free pass and Jake was Victoria's, the four of them agreed to a one-time-only night of sex.  One night turns into two nights, two into three, three into four... and though it wasn't what any of them planned on, two new relationships are started, Lizzie and Alex, Victoria and Jake.  Lizzie and Victoria's relationship continues as before with the added bonus that they now each have a boyfriend.

I will go into more detail about the story in a later post, but for now I will leave you with an excerpt from the story and a link in case you'd like to download it.
*to download the PDF file, click on the downward pointing arrow on the top left of the document

Yet to be named story (excerpt 1) - Bree Guildford

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'Vampire Rugby' (unofficial title) - excerpt 1


Alex was doing his best to concentrate on driving but couldn't help sneaking glances at Lizzie every so often. She was really there. In his car. Going home. With him. To... He shook his head and once again focused on the road. Crashing was not an option. He ran a hand through his hair and was sure he heard Lizzie let out a little whimper... it was one of the hottest noises he'd ever heard. He willed time to speed up because if they didn't get home soon he was going to explode, in a very big way!

“I can't believe this is happening...” Alex said quietly and when Lizzie didn't respond he realised she hadn't heard him. He chuckled quietly and she turned to him
“I'm sorry, what?” Lizzie asked, blushing.
“Oh... uh... I was... talking to myself, really...” Alex replied, suddenly feeling even more flustered.
“Mmm?” Lizzie prompted him. He took a deep breath.
“It's just that... I can't quite believe this is happening... I mean, you know, I didn't think when I went to Puzzles this afternoon that THIS is how my day was gonna end,” he said honestly.
“Hey! That's my line!” Lizzie giggled.
“I can also tell you that neither Jake nor I really believed you girls would go through with that 'free pass' thing,” Alex commented and Lizzie smirked at him.
“That was pretty obvious. But we are very serious. And while we're on the subject of the free pass thing...” she started and then stopped.
“What? You have a very long list full of movie stars?” Alex asked teasingly. Lizzie laughed.
“No, actually. There is only ONE name on my list.”
“And who is th..... OH!!!!” Alex exclaimed when he understood what she was saying. “Well, I'm very, um, flattered!” Alex told her, in complete honesty.

As they stopped at a red light, Alex turned to Lizzie and, moving a hand to the side of her face, pulled her in toward him and kissed her with all the hunger he was feeling, letting out a little groan as her tongue swiped against his own. In a perfect world, that particular red light would have been red for a few minutes so he would have time to help her straddle him and then plunge deep inside her and make her scream. His cock twitched with the thought and he wasn't at all surprised when the car behind him tooted, indicating the light had turned from red to green and he was holding up the traffic.

“Lost in thought?” Lizzie asked him and he chuckled huskily.
“Like you wouldn't believe!” he replied and she laughed.
“Oh I would believe, Mr Bradshaw. I would very much believe!” Lizzie said, biting her lip when he looked at her and raised an eyebrow.
“And what would make you so believing?” he asked her, smirking.
“I was just harbouring some rather explicit thoughts, that's all,” Lizzie responded.

Again Alex felt his cock stirring and wondered how in the hell he would be able to make it home without crashing and killing both of them.

Finally... finally they arrived at his house and after turning the car off he hastily undid his seatbelt – trying to not appear too eager – but he knew his eagerness was blatantly obvious to Lizzie. Not that she looked as if she had all the time in the world. He grinned at her and opened his door, surprised when Lizzie put her hand on his thigh.

“No,” she told him sternly, he looked at her confused.
“You want me to take you home?” he asked, hoping he was very wrong.
“No,” she replied and gave him a look that was pure sexual desire.
“What do you want me to do then?” he asked, feeling rather puzzled.
“Move your seat back as far as it goes,” she instructed him. He did as she asked, then licked his lips as she turned in her seat and in one smooth movement was straddling him.
“I... um...” Alex stumbled. Lizzie grinned at him and then placed her hands on his shoulders.
“There is no way I'm waiting an extra minute to have you inside me,” she informed him, and with that, moved her hands down between them and undid the button on his jeans – rising up on her knees so he could lift himself up and pull his pants and boxers down, just far enough.
“Oh god, I'm so glad you feel that way,” Alex exclaimed, and then all talking ceased.

Their hands roamed each other’s bodies, their lips moved against each other in a manner that soon made them breathless. Though they had had minimal foreplay he knew that neither could wait any longer so he hooked his index finger inside her panties and pulled them to the side. Lizzie plunged down on top of him and finally he was inside her.

So much sexual tension had built between them that Alex wasn't at all surprised when he immediately started to feel his orgasm building up... her pussy felt so wet and tight around his cock, it was impossible to pretend to have any form of self restraint. Not when he wanted her so badly. His hands quickly moved to her hips and he held her tightly against him, knowing that their close proximity to each other would be causing non-stop friction against her clit. Yes, he was a man – a very horny one at that - but he wasn't selfish and wanted the experience to be just as powerful for her. Perhaps even more so. Maybe if it was mind-blowing enough, they could discuss the possibility for another night of... free pass style sex... He was getting way ahead of himself though. They hadn't even finished having sex for the first time!

The combination of her tongue in his mouth, her fingers digging into his shoulders and her pussy tightly clenching at his cock made it very hard for him to try and control his responses. Lizzie was moaning loudly and he could feel her pussy starting to get tighter and tighter around him, so he knew that things were equally as intense for her. As she started to grind harder he instinctively pulled her down harder against him and as she began to moan in a very loud, high pitched fashion, he felt his orgasm getting very close to ripping free. He braced himself, and then in what worked out to be a case of exceptional timing, they both came – loud, hard, shaking.

Lizzie collapsed against his chest and he kissed the top of her head as he wrapped his arms around her. For a couple of minutes they were silent, but then she looked at him and grinned.

“Sorry for my unladylike actions, but I just couldn't help myself... I have wanted you so badly, for such a long time,” Lizzie said, he chuckled.
“Oh believe me, no need to apologise,” Alex answered and kissed her again.
“Restraint has never been my strong point,” Lizzie admitted and Alex shrugged.
“Restraint is overrated!” he remarked and Lizzie laughed.
“Another of my lines!” she laughed. He couldn't stop himself from kissing her again.
“Shall we go inside now? Unless you feel the need to have sex on the path... FYI I'm totally cool with the idea if that's the case!” Alex teased and Lizzie raised an eyebrow at him.
“Don't go putting thoughts in my head!” she remarked and they both laughed.

After untangling their bodies from each others, Lizzie and Alex managed to make it out of the car and he led her along the concrete path (without stopping half way to have sex!) and into the house. Alex didn't get a chance to take her to the bedroom because the moment the door was closed, Lizzie pushed him up against the wall and climbed him like a tree.


Victoria followed Jake inside and bit her lip in anticipation. She couldn't believe she was actually in his house, and that she was going to have sex with him (more than once, she hoped). Standing in the kitchen, he turned to her and smiled warmly.

“Can I get you anything?” he asked – she knew he was referring to a drink - but couldn't resist.
“You...” she responded and found herself biting her lip again. By the time he was finished with her, there was going to be a hole in her damn lip.

Jake stepped closer to her and pressed her up against the bench then they began to kiss again, his hands working their way down her sides coming to rest lightly on her hips. Victoria placed her hands on his shoulders and as the kiss intensified her fingertips made their way up his neck and she moved her hands around the back of his head, burying her fingers in his hair. They both let out little moans of pleasure at the same time and Victoria felt her body starting to respond.

The kissing went on for a long time and although there was a lot of anticipation about what was to come, neither appeared to be in a hurry for things to get to that point... both knew that the longer they waited before finally giving in, the better it would be. That said, Victoria was quite literally aching to have him inside her and the fact she could feel his hardness against her belly told her he was feeling just as... in need.. as she was.

“I hate to be so forward, but... I really... need you,” Victoria said quietly against his mouth, and he pressed harder against her and tugged on her bottom lip with his teeth, causing her to whimper loudly.
“Be as forward as you want to,” Jake said, gasping for breath when the kiss broke off.
“Lead the way,” Victoria prompted and Jake smirked naughtily at her.
“There is actually something I've wanted to do for a long time...” Jake said, looking at her suggestively.

Before Victoria could respond, Jake put his hands under her ass and lifted her up. She instinctively wrapped her legs around him and he walked them through the lounge, down the hallway and into what appeared to be an office. She looked at the desk and grinned, imagining Jake doing the cliché pushing of all desk contents onto the floor, then taking her right there on the desk. When he bypassed the desk Victoria was surprised, but then her eyes focused on the high backed leather executive chair and she understood exactly what he was going to do. What they were going to do.

Again she was wrong.

Jake didn't sit on the chair and pull her down on top of him like she'd expected he would, instead he crouched down in front of the chair so that Victoria was sitting on it then, moving his hands behind his back, unwrapped her legs from his waist. He pulled a little lever on the side of the chair and the seat back moved to a reclined position, Victoria going with it.

“Perfect,” Jake said quietly and then, with her assistance, removed her skirt.

Spreading her legs he ran his hands up her thighs and over hips until his fingers were hooked in the waistband of her panties. Victoria lifted her bottom off the chair again and Jake began to slowly pull her underwear down. As he slipped them over her heels he looked up, his eyes sparkling.

“The heels are staying on,” he informed her and Victoria laughed.

She completely understood where he was coming from... she almost died whenever Lizzie wore heels and loved nothing more than having sex with her while she was still wearing them.

“I completely understand,” Victoria answered winking at him. He gulped noisily and gave her a pained look.
“As if I wasn't horny enough,” he remarked and Victoria raised an eyebrow at him. “Then you go and mention what you and your girlfriend do when you have sex... you really think I need the added mental imagery?” he joked.
“So, what are you going to do to me, Boss?” Victoria asked, thinking to herself that it was probably a good thing he didn't know about her little boss fetish.

Victoria waited for a naughty retort, instead he answered by dipping his head between her thighs and slowly licking from her hole to her clit. Victoria gasped. She had NOT expected that. After her initial (pleasant) shock her first instinct was to move her hands to his head, so she could tangle her fingers in his hair and hold his mouth more firmly against her. He repeatedly licked slowly from her hole to her clit and back again for what felt like hours, but in reality it was only a couple of minutes... something about the position she was in caused his tongue to create a more intense sensation than if she was lying on a bed, couch, floor, bonnet of a car – and she couldn't help but moan loudly and get absolutely carried away by what he was doing to her.

There had been an enormous build up of sexual tension over the course of the day, well, from the moment she saw Jake at Puzzles. The flirting, the looks, the desire, and it had all made her very very horny. Some of that tension was of course released when she and Lizzie had had sex when they got home after leaving Puzzles – but it was really a different type of sexual tension – and it had only continued to build at the restaurant. Because of that, when Jake began to focus more on her clitoris she felt her orgasm starting to build almost straight away and she knew there was no point in trying to keep it at bay. When Jake moved her legs so they were over his shoulders Victoria felt things speeding up even more and she knew that it wouldn't be long. She just hoped he wouldn't mind her speedy climax.

Jake's tongue moved fast, back and forward over her clit and she could feel her pussy getting tighter and tighter with each swipe. Her moans became louder and more high-pitched, and though she tried not to, she was also pushing his face harder and harder against her while her hips bucked against his mouth. Her head was thrashing around, there was absolutely no way she could keep still. Her orgasm hadn't even hit yet and already it felt powerful. She held tightly to his hair, and when he suddenly pressed his face harder against her pussy she came undone, her orgasm hitting hard, her screams so loud they could probably be heard all around the neighbourhood. It seemed to go on forever and when she finally began to come down Jake began licking softly up and down her slit making sure to avoid any contact with her very sensitive clitoris. For one so comparatively young he had quite the skill when it came to oral. If Victoria hadn't been so dead from her orgasm she would have blushed at the thought of how much younger than her he was. But in her state she really didn't give a fuck.

Jake looked up at her and grinned. She managed to grin back even if her brain wasn't functioning well enough for her to perform the simple task of forming words. As Jake carefully moved her legs off his shoulders, he kissed the top of each of her thighs then stood up. Putting his hands on the armrests of the chair, he leaned over and kissed her. She whimpered as she tasted herself on him then moaned quietly because of the soft nature of the kiss. After the intensity up until that point it was nice to have a kiss so gentle. Even if it did leave her wanting more.

She had just had a crazily intense orgasm and she was already wanting more? Seriously?

“Well, that was certainly worth the wait!” Jake said, his voice husky. Victoria wasn't sure if he was referring to making her cum or finally making someone cum on his big boss chair, but she didn't care either way.
“That was... wow...” Victoria replied, not really knowing what word to use to describe exactly what it was. Wow seemed to fit the bill.
“Uh huh, it was pretty... wow!” Jake answered, kissing her again.

Somewhere deep inside she felt an ache and mentally rolled her eyes at herself. She was terrible! The man had just made her cum in pretty spectacular fashion and she was already starting to want more?

“It was very unexpected...” Victoria commented, then realised he could have taken that the wrong way. “I mean, unexpected in the way that I thought you were going to take me on your desk... or that I'd be straddling you on this big boss man chair... good unexpected...” Victoria said, trying to explain what she'd meant. “Not that either of the other options would have been bad...” Victoria added, then felt like slapping her own face. “Please just kiss me, so I stop rambling,” she pleaded.
“Gladly...” Jake replied and then kissed her again – this time not quite as softly as the more recent kisses - and there was no way Victoria could hide the fact she was starting to feel aroused again.

Without a word Jake stood up then leaned down and, putting one arm behind her back and the other under her knees, lifted her up and walked out of the office kissing her the entire time. He carried her through another doorway and Victoria realised they were now in his bedroom. Seconds later she was lying on his bed, with him lying beside her. She couldn't stop grinning as she thought about the events of the day and, sneaking a quick glance at him, she saw he was smiling just as much as she was.

“I don't know about you,” Jake started. “But today has been fucking crazy, in an awesome way, and I am exhausted!” he finished. Victoria laughed.
“It has been a very strange day, but good strange... And yes, I'm tired as well,” she responded, wondering what would happen next. For the first time, she felt a tiny bit awkward.
“I'm going to go and get a drink and use the bathroom. Do you want me to bring you a drink back?” Jake asked, rolling in toward her and kissing her. She felt a little more relaxed after that.
“A glass of water would be lovely... I'm a little parched!” Victoria said and he winked at her.
“All that screaming and moaning you were doing, I'm not surprised!” he teased and he had a point.
“That was all your fault!” Victoria gasped and he chuckled.
“Maybe I'll bring you two glasses of water then,” he said, winking at her before he got off the bed and left the room. She hoped that he meant what she thought he was implying... that there'd be more screaming and moaning before the night was over.

Victoria wondered how Lizzie's night was going and, rather than feeling jealous or weird about the fact she was off having sex with someone else, she felt more than a little turned on as she imagined what Alex may have been doing to Lizzie right at that moment. Sitting up, she picked up her handbag from the floor (obviously Jake had dropped it in on their way to the office) and got her phone out. She text Lizzie saying 'Hope that gorgeous man is everything you imagined he would be! Love you to bits, can't wait to see you tomorrow. Sweet dreams.. if you sleep at all, that is! Love you xxx'. She by no means expected an immediate reply, but knew that Lizzie would text her when she could... she didn't exactly expect her to stop mid-sex to check her phone and respond to a text message!

1 comment:

  1. Sex in the car for a first date! Who DOES that??? ;)
    I love it.